Netball Article

I am in the netball team, and my coach gave me the opportunity to write a little article for my school newsletter, so this is the article I wrote:

On Saturday, Henderson North Diamonds played an excellent game.But it seemed strange, we had played Gladstone All Stars before, yet their team played really good. They must have improved by some kind of method. Maybe, they had decided to use a different technique. The reason is not really clear. Well, when we played them, I was very surprised and impressed! They were awesome! By the third quarter, they were WAY ahead of us. It turns out, they won. It was unbelievable! I was so sure we would win. After the game, when we all did our cheers, my coach announced that we were all players of the day! I was soooo exhilarated! At the end of the day, I went home with a pleasant feeling in my heart.