"Where am I ?", I wondered aloud when I woke to. I opened my eyes with a flutter and glanced around. I couldn't see a thing. I stood up from what seemed like nothing, and started to walk around, trying to find a switch that could illuminate the darkness, but to no avail. All of a sudden, I heard a sound. I strained my ears to listen. I tried to track down the noise by walking towards it. But now, it was gone. All I could hear were my footsteps bouncing from the walls of nothing.
"There it is again!", I exclaimed, " That noise!."
It sounds like soft weeping. It was so close, yet so far. It seems to be sprinting away from me.
" You have to escape.", an anonymous voice spoke.
I was shocked when I turned around. To my surprise, I found a girl who looked like she was twelve.
" Excuse me," I responded to her, " What did you say?"
" You have to escape from here.", she replied in a soft, scared tone.
"Why? ", I asked her.
"You just have to," , she said in an ominous voice, " It's not safe here."
Hi Renitta,
ReplyDeleteI think your story is great I got the shivers down my back when read it. It is a scary story.
Brinal
Hello Brinal,
ReplyDeleteThan you for visiting by blog and commenting on it. I don't think it is scary enough.
I still need to work on it. But, thanks for encouraging me! :)
Renitta
Henderson North School :)
Wow this story is really amazing.
ReplyDeleteYou know you can see my blog press writings 6smaccbrendon.blogspot.com
Hello,
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting my blog and commenting on it. I am guessing your name is Brendon, according to your student blog address. I visit your blog sometimes, but I rarely get time to comment, despite myself having a lot of time on my hands. :(
Thanks once again.
Renitta
Henderson North School :)
Hi Renitta,
ReplyDeleteThat is such a wonderful story!!! I really love the use of your writing :) I also love your words :)
Your blog is such a cool and pretty blog.
Sara
Henderson North School :D
Hello Sara,
DeleteIt is nice to see that you have commented on my blog. If you want to increase the use of different words and sentences, you have to read more books. It helps a lot.
Thanks for commenting once again.
Renitta
Henderson North School :)
Hi
ReplyDeleteI love your story and i encourage you to keep writing. Please continue this story its really interesting and i am really enjoying it so far.
From Cystal ( Mount Annan Christian College)
Hello Crystal (pretty name),
DeleteThanks you for commenting on my blog. Thanks for encouraging me to keep on writing. I really love writing stories because you are in your on world and no-one can interrupt your story on command you.
Thanks for commenting once again,
Renitta
Henderson North School :)
PS: Do you like writing stories?